A Mouse in the Circuitry - A Kammi Kettu Story

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Katie-the-Angel-Witch

• Road Trip!
  Jun 29, 2019
• Well that's ONE way to make a Convertible
  Jun 22, 2019
• Hello Mom, I’m your ch-ch-ch-CHERRY BOMB
  Jun 17, 2019
• KNOCK KNOCK MOUSE GONNA GIVE IT TO YA
  Jun 10, 2019
• Tea Time
  Jun 6, 2019
• Ol Jeezy would be rolling in his grave if he was there
  Jun 2, 2019
• The First Time
  May 30, 2019
• Public Speaking Class
  May 11, 2019
• Saved by the Bell
  May 7, 2019
• Where's the European Space Agency housed again?
  May 6, 2019
• Saving Myself from Tears
  Apr 30, 2019
• Post Saint Nick’s Chaotic Behavior
  Apr 27, 2019
• Bonding Glue
  Apr 23, 2019
• Shady Business
  Apr 22, 2019
• Winter Hiking
  Apr 20, 2019
• Tempting Fate
  Apr 19, 2019
• First Uploads are the Hardest
  Apr 19, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• superdbgtfanRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  mouse girl making super stuff either just because or for heroes
• Kara NullRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story is a lot of fun. You never know what type of shinaniganry Bridget will get up to next. It's really a breath of fresh air to have such an upbeat character in the Kammiverse.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  Props on Mother Mouse for taking in Šárka.
  That's a great moment and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!
• Luna FoxfireRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall this is one of the few, Lighthearted and sweet story that is not too dark in the Kammiverse!
  The style is good, and I love the part of the reference to where you live that you have put in your story. It is really fun to read, heartwarming and a little bit educational.
  The Story, the More we learn about Bridget family and past.... the more we want to cry or commit murder... Luckily, We have a Cute and adorable shark girl and a fox fluffy dragon robot, so we have our anger slowly die in their cuteness <3
  The grammar is very good, I didn't see typo or errors for the moments!
  The character... All have memory, past, feeling, and dreams... They are all so Alive then seeing them in real life would be like meeting an acquaintance that you know from a long time... They are so much alive that it made me cry when I see them suffer and be in pain. They are truly lovely and incredible!
  Overall it is a great story thanks, Kathie!
• Mithril MercenaryRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I love all the not-bigoted characters SO MUCH~! 💞
• Rikki RattusRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A lovely story, Mouse in the Circuitry is the type of story that has you sold on the characters the moment they appear. Due to this it is almost always filled with wonderful chapters where your heart melts alongside the in-universe audience.
  Everything the three main chraracters do is realistic and responsive towards the realities of someone who would go through these events and their personalities. The generous Mouse Mum responds to an intruder as she has before, but then loves the hell out of the nervous and excitable Sharky Šárka, whilst the fox-dragoo looks on with her lego.
  As mentioned in other reviews, the story manages to show the disaster within the Kammiverse but in a way which is uplifting, light and hopeful.
  It is also a loveling fitting addition to the universe by focusing outside of Penrith, and giving the readers of the universe a broader perspective and position on the world created through the Emergence.
  Of course, no story is perfect, but the issues within Mouse in the Circuitry are ones which are wholeheartedly accidental and ones that can be rectified rather easily.
  - The first two chapters are the largest cuplrits of this, with the first chapter misspelling algorithim (something already fixed) and the second having one sentence which doesn't make much sense, "it would be significantly harder to disappear me.". However, simple revisions are all that is needed to solve these problems and do not distract from the greatness of the story.
  - The other problems within these chapters is the inclusion of references to reality, these being Disney's House of Mouse (referred to as house of mouse) and Kagamine Rin (Dare's voice synthesizer). Whilst grounding your work in reality makes it more accessible to readers doing so in such a way that leaves some readers not understanding your references is, to me, a detriment to a story. The most simplistic solution to these problems would be to add exposition to them as a part of the story, as you had done when reve
• SonyaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Mouse in the circuitry is good. As a kammiverse entry it is very friendly to newcomers (like me when i started reading it), an enjoyable fun introduction to an universe that is diverse in style and tone. If you think that the previous kammiverse stories were to doom and gloom then this is the story to pull you in.
  But if your not interested in any of the kammiverse stories whatsoever i would still highly recommend this story as a fell good, kick bigotry where it hurts super hero story that is adorably cute .
  All in all i give this story 10/10, it is simply a goofy,fun,shamelessly cute story that will leave you with an need for MORE.
• TrashlynRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A mouse in the circuitry manages to perfectly tie itself into the source material, while reamining much more bright and hopeful than the rest o the stories.
  Set in Europe rather than the rustbelt American city of Penrith, a Mouse in the Circuity is about a trans popular tech youtuber who finds herself transformed into a savant of technology Mouse-girl.
• TwasHonestMistakeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Okay, honestly I am terrible at writing out my thoughts and can't judge style for shit, but here goes nothing.
  Now, does the story have a lot on the subject of a trans person. Yes it does. SO what? The main characters are trans. The subject kinda comes up, and I love how the characters deal with it in the Emergence.
  Want me to talk about plot, style, etc? Look at the stars. Nuff said.
  A really great addition highlighting other powers and how people are dealing with them. Provides a nice slice of life in a semi dark universe, though I can sense a dose of reality getting ready to smack us in the face in the distance.
  Really just a great heart warming read.
• JakylorhideRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  What can I say that hasnt been said before. Katie manages to write a Kammi-Kettu story that fills you with warm fuzzies all over. Full of lovable characters in an almost slice of life setting, this installment to the universe gives a well earned break from the harsher realities our favorite emerge go through
• jadecriminalRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Decent story, opens well. Outlines trans issues reasonably.
  Protagonist is a youtuber and I find it hilarious.
  A bit too fast on the adoption but kinda fluffy and all the characters have flair and amuse me gratly.
  Protagonist centered morality though so YMMV. (Breaking and entering, assault, extorion, torture, intimidation, trespassing on government property, theft, kidnapping a minor. All justitfied in character.)
  So all in all 95% decent read but switch from fluff and tech stuff to angry bone breaking on is a bit jarring.