A Meeting of the ways

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Description

Why do the enigmatic Blood Elves keep raiding the human world Cestus IV? And why do they seem to only take prisoners back with them?Ostracised from her family, Zahra Wellson has had to join the military to fund her university course, and this puts her at the heart of the next raid.Valna'a Nightshade, daughter of the Clan Father knows why they want captives from the lesser races. What she doesn't know is why this redheaded human is important to her.

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Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: gb030104

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
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Views: 15,010

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LynnhardtRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Written very well, the tone, cadence and flow of the story are all great, work well together. The grammar is exceptional as well. It isn't what I expected though, I'll say that.
It's dark, and not in the cutesy "I just committed warcrimes/genocide ~teehee" way most webnovels that call themselves dark are either. which is refreshing, even if it is also infuriating in a way.
Only major issue, if the description stays as is, I can see this story having a hard time maintaining a good rating. Even if it's just a note at the beginning/end. pointing out that it starts a bit slow, with elves, and any sci-fi elements taking a while to be mentioned is a good idea.. In addition, the fact that this isn't a fluff piece, and the protagonist will never be strong/op is sadly something that needs to be mentioned to keep people's assumptions from making them read and the leave a bad review.