A Magic Sniper in Another World

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Description

Zack Blake, a boy of contradictions. Stupidly smart, selfishly selfless and responsively reckless.

How will he fare up in a world where he doesn't belong?

Caught in the crossfires of a conspiracy, follow his adventures as he tries to save the two worlds he holds most dear.

Above is a new, shorter synopsis whilebelow is the original one.

Zack Blake. A normal high school student, was leisurely studying in his classroom.

Or that was what's supposed to happen if he wasnormal.

He was the son of a Major Genral and became a Special Lieutenant at the age of 17 and saved his school from terrorists, only to die due to a bullet wound.

When he awoke.Yes.Awoke.He was in a completely white space and saw a white haired girl looking at him.

"Hello, Zack. I'm an Overseer named Alia.And welcome to my realm"

Given a choice to die as is or be sent into another world, what will he do?

Watch over Zack as he tries to survive and enjoy a world of swords and magic full of action, mystery and adventure by battling demons, humans and even Gods.

Constructive Criticism is accepted. I wish to improve my writing, and this story would be the first novel i've ever written...

Updates will be postedveryerratically.

If you will rate this story less than 3 stars, please do leave a review so I will know what the problem was in the story.

Cover art is not mine and I found ithere. If the artist wants it taken down, I shall comply.

Hiatus until summer kicks in. It's a bit of a mess right now. Also,please check out my other fiction, Alice in Magicland. AIML will be active since it's much easier to write than this novel.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: EtherialEphemeral

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 797
Views: 158,802

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Community Reviews(10)

druiseekerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good story. It's been a good story. I recommend that you give it a shot.
Kuruto_desuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good Story and really liking it.. and hope you dont get discourage by those "Critiques that wont write their own story and find out how hard it is type of people" hope you post more chapters
WecareRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Inventive start in this story. The author is improving as the story is rolling out. I'm interested in seeing where she goes with it!
adamx1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I come from other novel site and this is the first novel i read on this site.
I cant review much about this novel because there is only few chapters so far.
-The story so far is good,the pace might be abit fast for some.Try describe what happen more.You can make it uselessly long,it fine.The more you describe it the more we know the story the way you want us to know it.
-I love the MC's personality
-The humor is good and smooth.small joke here and there is fine.Some good chuckles is always welcome.Make the story more welcoming and not too straight.
I love the story so far,and I have a feeling i will be staying for a long time.
Good job and Thank you for your hard work.
l3lacksheepRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I find myself enjoying ths much more than I thought I would. It is a good story that I hope continues.... please.
I am found of yhe writing even as the author continues to better rhemselves and delevop more into their own style.
I look forward to more in the future.
ImMrMeeseeksRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Really like what I read so far hope you keep writing it.
tenaciouspfcRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
really liking the premise so far, as well as his death not being cliché.
Lord Of Mild InterestRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story gave me a good fucking chuckle in the first few chapters.
That alone gives it a highish rating.
But besides that the premise is neat and I recall someone else attempting todo this idea as well but unfortunately didn't go too well.
You know what fuck it I'll do an in depth one.
Style: It's a LitRPG, not exactly a new concept, he has a gun tho so that's neat.
Story: Dude died and now has a gun in fantasy world, simple, sweet, kill some goblins.
Character: The MC is kind of silly, I'm not sure if it's a bad or good silly though.
He is silly because at 17 he dealt with a terrorist attack and in his words
"Dealt with a dozen of them" by himself. Wat.
Also he is smart and reads, n e a t.
Its early days tho and he hasn't been properly fleshed out yet so I'll cut him some slack.
Besides him the only other character worth mentioning is "Random Sniper Dude" who is easily a perfect 20/10 when it comes to characters in my opinion.
Grammer: Good.
Overall: The story is pretty silly so far but in an enjoyable way. Also it's very early days at the moment, currently only six chapters, but for what's their it's an enjoyable little read.
Also I like guns, and killing poor fucks that don't know that guns > shields + pointy sticks since I'm a bad person, so if the Author gives me that I'll give this a ten out of ten.
monoliithRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Enjoying it so far. Grammar isn't perfect, but that can come with experience. The good thing is the story is holding together well. Not super sure about the whole "wanna get back home" aspect. That can seriously limit the character and cause you to have issues with the ending accidently sneaking up on you. But other than that, great.
dionysusRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
It has a good plot, I mean, how could you dislike modern stuff getting mashed into medieval fantasies? Even though the plot is speeding as fast as a bullet train does and ignores most environment descriptions, you could still enjoy it, but not for long periods.
All I’m saying is, keep up the good work! And it’s worth your time, though the author MAY need to work on grammar and stuff.