A Letter Without Mysteries

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2022

Author

Hsofth

• A Letter Without Mysteries
  Aug 8, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• OguriDayDayRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Overall (4,0/5,0): It's a really well written... letter. It does it's job to serve as a story perfectly, if not great.
  Style (4,0/5,0): I liked this kind of style. It's fancy and a perfect style for stories set in the age of Christianity. No characters in this story uttered a single word. And that is great since this is really like the story it should be. The only problem I found is that I can't seem to like it more than 4.
  Story (4,0/5,0): The story is great. Chastity seemed to write a journal at first, but then when she knew that she's going to die, it turned into a sad and tragic letter. The story has no fillers. And the letter is straightforward. No fillers. The journey of her friend, Chastity. But then again, it does seemed like it was still very short and that affects the impact of the climax, and the ending. There's still room for improvements.
  Grammar (3,5/5,0): While I think this don't really matters when you set your mind into making a story and started to write nonsenses. As long as you understand what it is written then you're grammatically correct (not).
  Character (5,0/5,0): One of the aspects, and the only aspects I thought of giving a solid 5 is, character. There's only 2 main casts in the story, Lenora and Chastity. Whilst Lenora don't speak anything in this particular story, the reader would get glimpses of how Lenora is. And that is, in my opinion, a selling point of this story. Good Chastity.
  Extras: It's great. And worth the little time since it's short. I recommend it.
• RznRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The blurb suffices for the plot. Chastity writes a letter in a dire situation and the resolution of the story is unknown. Going by the content of the letter, it is very rough with long run on sentences and a jumble of ideas and details that are irrelevant to the situation. The piece is hampered by the structure and while it works, it builds tension to leave the reader hanging.