A Legendary Odyssey

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Zachariah is teleported by a mysterious stone to a supernatural world filled with mages, gene warriors, and magical kung-fu practitioners

Having lived as a commoner man in a 3rd world country, he had long been sick of having his life in the hands of powers that could effortlessly erase him on a whim!

In this world, he saw the hope of becoming a power himself, in a world dominated by personal prowess!

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As this is the first book I've ever written and English isn't my native language, expect some errors.

Chapters(18 total)

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  • SteampocalypseRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The setting of this story, which I think is a sci-fi cultivation world, is interesting and seems to be done pretty well. Even if it doesn't remain in this setting, it's setting up for something cool. However, the grammar is incorrect and it's very show-don't-tell and overly filled with cultivation terms. I would focus on characters, show stuff more gradually, and edit my prose to make it read smoother.