A King's Business (GOT/ASOIAF)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

Path Liar

• Chapter 75
  Apr 19, 2025
• Chapter 74
  Apr 1, 2025
• Chapter 73
  Mar 24, 2025
• Chapter 72
  Mar 10, 2025
• Chapter 71
  Mar 8, 2025
• Chapter 70
  Mar 7, 2025
• Chapter 69
  Mar 7, 2025
• Chapter 68
  Mar 6, 2025
• Chapter 67
  Mar 6, 2025
• Chapter 66
  Mar 5, 2025
• Chapter 65
  Mar 5, 2025
• Chapter 64
  Mar 5, 2025
• Chapter 63
  Jun 7, 2021
• Chapter 62
  Jun 6, 2021
• Chapter 61
  May 23, 2021
• Chapter 60
  May 20, 2021
• Chapter 59
  May 18, 2021
• Chapter 58
  May 17, 2021
• Chapter 57
  May 16, 2021
• Chapter 56
  May 10, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(8)

• wheresJerZRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Something is special about how the dialogue feels and flows so natuarlly like it is original to the setting. I will be following this until it is finished. As someone with a rudimentary understanding of the GOT world im loving the story. The quality and progression with the foreshadowing is outstanding.
• FIENDRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  No words, no flattery, no 10 stars can describe how breathtaking every moment reading this book was
  I seen it on trending for a while but thought it as another simpering pass at fan fic. A14 yo watpadd fiction at best.
  Good qualities of this novel include lots of foreshadowing, scheming done right, not dragging contrieved plots.. idk u just gotta read it
  No romance no harem so thats a +1
  Clever badass morally questionable mc +1
  Honestly GOT fan fic done write. Hell half the time i wanna worship the "god amongst men" himself, King Tommen
• LoDRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story needs a title change and a revampted synopsis. Because from the title, it looks like your typical dime a dozen SI fanfic.
  Don't be fooled, this is the dimond in the rough you are looking for. The characters are very well written and recognisable. The pacing is great and the story unfolds naturally.
  The MC is your typical anti-hero done right. Smart, cunning and with understandable actions.
  Very glad this got picked up again.
  AUTHOR: please change the title & synopsis. Here are some suggestions:
  Title:
  The Spare : Rise of Tommen
  Lessons in ruthlessness
  A song of Stags and Lions
  Synopsis: When King Joeffry dies, his brother assumes the Throne. But Tommen is not who he once was. Armed with the memories of a ruthless crime lord from earth, Tommen will play the game of thrones. He plays to win and doesn't play fair.
• TheGreenKrakenRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Holds up with some of the best of them on FF net. Honestly the author clearly demonstrates he has an excellent grasp of the lore and gives the fans enough service to make GRRM proud. Very curious to see where he goes with the plot now the a few major derailments have occurred.
  Good stuff.
• The_Lord_BreadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like the premise, and it hasn't been done much before; also fan fictions of extreme dedication tend to be exclusive to AO3 or FF.net. I sincerely hope other readers feel the same. My only wish is for the author to keep the story alive with fresh and exciting updates!
  CHAPTER 1-3
  I really like where this going, and you seem to have some ideas on where you wish to take your story so I won't mention anything specific.
  I do have one problem though, I feel like there is wasted potential for chapters between Funeral prep, Tywin and SITommen, and Bran's meeting. While many would call such details filler, I call them world building. Good luck!
  CHAPTER 4
  This chapter was a bit too short and lacked much meaning, but I understand the author may wish to skip past parts they are uncomfortable with; so be it. I still dislike the large time skips, and would really like to see longer chapters, but the story is still in its infancy, and must be nurtured through positive thinking and the author's dedication. Please keep up the good work!
  CHAPTER 5
  All my issues as of yet have been resolved, and the direction is seemingly more fluid with each chapter. Well done!
  CHAPTER 6
  The story is now leading unto some major stuff, so my review may change in rating every so often, but definitely worth my time.
  CHAPTER 7
  No timeskip so yay, but his method of testing could really cause some issues with insanely stubborn knights like Ned
  CHAPTER 8-10
  AMAZING! The author clearly understands the plot and the subtleties of the court of King's Landing. Well done 10/10.
  CHAPTER 11
  2nd favorite chapter so far, and again, zero errors, and an excellent understanding of the GOT universe. 10/10
  CHAPTER 12
  I love seeing how characters personalities play out in their actions, and I despise impossible characters that are just plain holy and good or needlessly evil. This story does character/s well.
  CHAPTER 13-14
  Couple of my favorite characters introduced into the story... hurray! Also how tall is SITommen? Jus
• TumoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  What a interseting set up. when i think about your premise and how refreshing it seems i cant help but let a smile grow on my face. i can literally picture the conflicts that are going to come up and am excited about how you are going to solve them, so keep it up man. Its only the first chapter as such there is not much i can but patiently wait for the next chapter to get a better look and idea where it is going, because the first chapter is great as it would garner the audience's attention but now starts the hard job of keeping them from the second chapter onwards.
• DecimvsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  High quality fanfictions like this are hard to come by unfortunately, but you've done a very good job so far. No all knowing MC, no harems, no instant overpowered armies or whatever cliches there are for these kinds of self insert books. For anyone else that might be considering reading this, do it, you won't be disappointed.
• moredreadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I've seen a lot of Game of Thrones fan fiction. With several stories with a self insert. This is the first I've seen however with Tommen as the MC. So for me it's new just for that.
  With it being Game of Thrones it's got to be explicit. The show and books were just to raw for it to be any other way and be close to be acceptable. This is very explicit.  There is a lot of violence and it's looking like it will only get darker.
  The writing is very good. It has some nice flow to it. No choppy dialogue. The characters are acting as they should. No out of character moments so far.
  With only 12 chapters it's hard to get a perfect read on a story, but I like what I've seen so far.