A Hand-Woven Universe

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What happens to a world of Magic and Dragons when a cultivator bursts into their universe? What about when a cultivator is raised right under their noses?How do Wizards and High Elves, Dungeons and Dwarves, fare against an unknowing cultivator and the Laws of the Universe?Epochs ago an Immortal left his inheritance behind on a dying plane of existence.Now, at the edge of what was once desolate world, the immortals inheritance is about to make himself known. And his name is Noone.An original cultivator of his world, unguided, and unrestrained.Noone is the powerless child of a civilazation locked away at the edge of the world. When tragedy occurs, and his world is turned around, he inherits the Will of The Ancestor. An ancient legendary being who protected the conclave of Tapestry, until the desolate world above would become re-inhabitable.

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IMPORTANT: This is a long-form narrative. If you don't enjoy slower-paced world building then this isnt the novel for you.

NOT: a systems/reincarnation story

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Lukis_Aurelius

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

BabbaprimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This review is of the story post-edit in 8/21/19. This book has left me nigh speechless so I will keep this short. The characters had feeling. I cared about them and their thoughts. I got nervous when I saw the POV switches early on but I ended up really liking them. I don't think an alternate POV will ever be as good as the protagonists Pov but this is the first time in a long time I have seen a reason to keep them, they feel well put together and bring the suspense that made me literally unable to put the book down. The genre? I don't really know what cultivation stories count as but I've read many of them but few to completion. I feel like the stories themselves get tired and it sucks the joy right out of the read for me. I don't see this happening here, there is no true dragon bloodline, there is no heavenly supreme star killing sutra, there is a fun character who is going through life like a human being might in the given circumstances.
CassanoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Really like your story this feels fresh and not like something i have read before
haven't found any grammatical errors, easy to read
hope this gets the amount of readers it deserve in my opinion
Thanks for the chapters :)
Icecold543Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
great keep it up
good job good job good job
VorzelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story has a very interesting concept that will keep you hooked the author is also very talented at writing and will make you feel for the characters definitely worth the read.
kazouRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Although this is a "cultivator" type novel, it couldn't be further for any tropes of the genre. The author creates a complex world, starting small and mysterious and slowly revealing answers while showing us a wider world. There were a few chapters that were a bit slow as they marked a transition in the story, thankfully they are over as of the time of this review. I removed half a star for this because I don't agree with a choice the author made in regards to the plot. I realize this is a purely personal point of view and some people in the comments clearly didn't mind the author's decision.
The characters are rich and colorful. Our hero starts off as somewhat of a blank slate and grows through the chapters in a very organic way. I'm not sure exactly how he will end up but up until now, he has integrated his experiences in a realistic way and that comforts me as to the future of this story.
Style-wise, I'm not a big fan of long winded descriptions and yet I didn't skip them because they were simple, to the point and highly evocative, the way the author describes the world and the hero's feelings resonate with me and a couple of scenes even made me pause to visualize and appreciate the feeling the MC should be feeling at that moment.
I removed half as star for grammar because I tend to read this story as soon as it's posted and I saw a couple of issues. Now, don't misunderstand : even just after posting, there are less errors here than in 90% of the good stories here, after they are edited. It just wouldn't be fair to give 5 stars as that would imply the grammar is flawless (it almost is).
TL;DR : Great story, very different from what you can find here usually, good change of pace, can't wait for the next chapter.
tenquiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
if you are into immediate gratification from a story than this is not for you. Instead this is an extremely well written epic that builds over time. I highly recommend it. Especially since it is so far along now. If I had read it when it was only ten or so chapters in I think I probably would have gone insane waiting for updates. However, enough of the story has been fleshed out at this point to keep me satisfied as I hopefully patiently wait for more.
NicebagdadRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Its a great concept, and I really do like the idea, but there is something in the way it's been written that kindof throws me off. I regularly get confused because I can't picture the world and when I do try I start noticing contradictions.
Spoiler: Spoiler
The cave for instance, its mentioned early on that most of their world is completely dark, it's portrayed as a dark cave with only the sound of shuffling feet here and there. (And glowing elemental atunement lines which are never mentioned again except in passing)
Like 5ish chapters later Noone can see everything and everyone. And at chapter 20ish its mentioned that the sunlight reaches the outcropping which would mean that there would be natural sunlight in the cave.
Many of the characters don't seem consistently inhuman that may be by design but that would need require it being consistent they do act like humans some times and at other times they act like the nonhumans they were portrayed as.
I am a stickler for detail and really miss that at times.
Good job, keep writing you definitely seem to be good at it, just work on certain small details and this could end up being quite a good read. :)
monoliithRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
As of Ch. 56
sherzuRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I like your story! I don't understand why we needed to read so much chapter about Tobias, Sarah. I don't believe it gave something more to the story.
The death of the inhabitant don't bother me, however the lack of information on the reason do bother me. It look like they are dead for conveniance. I will stop reading until there is more chatper and i will wait for more clarity.
In overall it's a good job but i feel like we fell in the clichés of the genre :/
catalinnrRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I would say till chapter 20, it's good and interesting to read , a good 5/5 i would say. Even the next few chapters are tending to be okay-ish (4/5).
Edit: 13/02/2019
So, i just came to see if anything changed ,but it seems is the same plot going forward.
Heh, author actually gave a crap about this review ,who knew? Well, 2 stars imo is draft material with 4+ being something readable on this site. So i changed my 1.5 to 2.
One thing tho, you wrote 90 smth chapters from what you say will be around 600 chapters story. It is not the reader's job to read something that doesn't make sense untill 400 chapters in the story.We don't know how the story will progress, it might suck, only the author knows how the events fit in the "grand scheme".
It's the story's and author's job to keep the reader engaged by making the story coherent,good and fun to read.
There have been a lot of people telling you since the story started going downhill that you need to take a step back and rethink but you kept going with the "grand scheme" that all will make sense later. You can bs someone into reading 50 chapters expecting the plot point started 90 chapters ago to come to a conclusion but you can;t bs someone into reading 400 chapters for the MAIN PLOT to make sense.
The main plot is the foundation of the story ,if it has holes it's bad, if you keep building over it instead of patching them ,then you might find yourself midway with nothing to build on since it toppled into a hiatus.