A gladiators life

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Description

A gladiator that goes by the name aralt has been imprisoned for several months, the gnawing hunger and a desire for freedom launched him into violence to free himself and craft a peaceful life.

(NOTE: I update the chapters by editing them.)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
kindboy

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREHORRORWAR AND MILITARY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.0/ 5.0
Views
465

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • WeavervaleRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I've asked the author to make this 10k but a review is a review.
    Grammar 3/5
    Several capitalization errors threw me out as well as regular old grammar stuff.
    Style 1/5
    You wouldn't think that missing spaces? No it's the dialogue tags.
    The problem as I see is, there is too many sentences where it's character verb thing. I'm looking at this and like every single line. This needs a rewrite and to be tossed to a critique group.
    There needs to be some variance in how the sentences come out.