A Future Destroyed - A Post-Modern Fantasy LitRPG

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Description

The Date: Tuesday, April 18, 2023The Time: 11:00 AM ESTThe Issue: The System Arrives!

Life was going well for the majority of humanity when a wave of energy passed over the world, and everything froze. A Pop-up appeared in front of everyone's eyes, whether awake or asleep. This pop-up read:Magic Anomaly Normalization Allocation (MANA) System has been activated.Local Space-Time has been stopped until processing has been completed.Currently Processing 11,789,972,382 Sentients on the planet.Processing...After that, everyone vanished into a Personal Tutorial, which is where our main character, Joriya Alvinos, starts out, after having been in a physical coma for more than a decade.

AN: This story is also being posted on Wattpad.

A very special thank you toOlivaprodesignon Fiverr.com for the exquisitely made cover art!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Johnist

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 551
Views: 162,345

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

SyrupotheosisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If you get to the first system interlude and don't love this fic, you may not actually like the LitRPG genre.
Please, Please keep writing!!
EnhozRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Everybody says the mc is super OP yea?What if I told you actually every human on Earth is almost as op, and that the story is more about kingdom building and galactic stuff than it is ''omg such a strong man, thanks for saving us''.
Everybody from Earth got 2 mil points, while other races by their maturity only have 250k.This changes the foundation of the story greately and is highly interesting compared to the other op mc stories on this site.
It definetly has potential, please keep on writing Mr. author.
Time_Keeper5669Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
He is just going with the flow look at it this way he is smart planning for the future and set up the space port can u think of all the strong enemies and allies coming to earth can't wait to read more.
Captain MoonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
If you love status update your gonna have a hard on. For the love of all that holy put your status under the spoiler so we dont have to scrol this wall of text. Overall it a good fiction if you dont read it to seriously
DaruneAlbaneRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So far storywise a bit too OP mc BUT as was said befor it is a setup for a bigger story .. humans vs everybody else
MC does need to be fleshed a bit more is a little flat
mad-nessRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The author creates an interesting world and a MC who has the potential to be very interesting once the story really develops.
I don't really mind the OP style so far as the story is just getting started and it seems clear that the MC is going to be facing planetary and even galactic level threats sooner rather than later. If you think he is OP then just pretend the author spent 100+ chapters to get him to this point.
This is definitely worth following until the author proves whether or not he can actually balance the OP MC in a fun and effective fashion.
EagleFireRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I've read up to the 17th chapter and will have to call it quits here. I've never been a fan of stories with overpowered protagonists, especially ones written by new and/or ameteur authors on this site, and this just reinforces that. You just need to read up to the 10th chapter to know what I mean.
The only reason this rating isn't lower is that the grammar actually isn't bad.
KoboldPatrolRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
(as of chapter 14)
A stat/skill/interface system comes to Earth and everybody can use a point-buy shop to improve their potential. The MC, through luck and synergy and system errors, is able to get more than 90% discount on prices and basically buys everything, including the impossible options: stats multiple times the original maximum level, all the magic and ki abilities, soulbound gear made from the universe's best material, whatever you can imagine. His first fights are ended quickly by throwing nukes left and right and critical hits back and front even though his opponents are of a very high tier.
I guess many people will like this kind of story but I don't like it. For me, overpowered characters that did not earn their abilities and that always instantly succeed in everything are just boring. It's like watching a fight between a human with a flame thrower and 100 crippled ants: nothing bad could ever happen to the MC but if so, it would be one all-powerful entity against another in a very unbelieveable way.
Ethernet StoryhunterRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
took over powered and then said meh turn it up to 11
Daoist_EverhopeRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Generic power fantasy crap