A Flight of Fancy

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When a baby is found by a powerful demon lord on the edge of reincarnation, she is possessed with his soul. She grows up flying through the forest and terrorizing the local lord's logging operations. But a knight's presence will complicate this. Is a demon really so evil after all?

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  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a coming of age, lesbian romance short story regarding a young woman who plays host to a demon lord's soul.  It's decent.  The style is interesting, if a little fourth-wall-breaky.  The characters are well-defined.  The plot is adequate.  There's a good focus on the right level of detail and moving along.  All-in-all, I'd recommend it.
    That said, it's something of a cautionary tale about not questioning your circumstances or, perhaps more egregiously, being raised so as to not question your circumstances. That note is a bit odd, and I frankly thought that perhaps it would be a tragedy at the end.  But, the story ends abruptly with the protagonist making a very important choice, and the epilogue is a happily ever after, with perhaps even more happy than would be expected.
    It's also probably a hair too short.  I get that it's a short story, but there seemed to be plot elements left unresolved.  Not sure those would have been terribly compelling as part of the story, but their obvious non-resolution leaves the reader asking for a bit more.