A Dropped Story

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Status

Hiatus

Author

TheDummy

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• RattedRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  This book is pretty good. The writing isn’t too bad, the character is pretty flat, and I feel as if the mc doesn’t really have a goal besides “get stronger”. Other than that it’s pretty enjoyable.
• orandel garnettRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  this is my unfiltered opinion:
  the story is unique and for the most part enjoyable but fails in every other aspect offering little to no detail about anything that’s happening in the story.
  its a power fantasy so many new and interesting shit is introduced and not only are they completely glossed over and forgotten to the detriment of the story but the main character's personality moves from chaotic neutral at best to down right petty this is really killing my moud who wants to read about a petty character not me.
  the mc's character has moved from completely flat in the beginning to completely petty i didn't sign up to grimdark and all of the story has just been boiled down to kill innocent cause trouble and revenge because there's no consequences and (because the mc is a petty person without morals) come on man i'm binge reading this absolute power fantasy and in one day i moved from this could be interesting to this is some petty tasteless shit without any consequences.( i mean even if the mc’s resorts to raping anything with a pulse and starts runing through the street naked and screaming profanities no one would be the wiser because the mc has the no consequences for your actions skill maxed out to it’s highest level).
  I mean the biggest motivation their was for mc to betray his race was simply because the demons where less snobbish than the humans. and everyone's just fine with that no one likes a traitor of their nation and the last i remember in times of peace between factions traitors are usually killed outright and that's just between factions much less races. why would a demon king / any king put his country at risk for someone like that. and then there's the fairy queen just because she didn't trust this random stranger that appeared in her territory it's enough for the mc to think she is a bitch and enough reason to enslave the race and send them into war with the other races who were rude to the mc. I mean that's some petty shit their my friend.and i th
• YinkoRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I can see what the author was trying to do, it's just that the idea is dumb.  He was trying to make it so that the system made life difficult for the protagonist in order to have a rational reason to throw him into challenging situations.  The issue with this is that it's goal is to make him into a god and it's actions run completely counter to that.
  On top of that massive failure, they also make the system way, way, too complicated and then change it on the fly.  They do an academy arc, which I have never seen work in any story.  At that point I dropped it, but I'm sure it's riddled with flaws for the next few dozens chapters as well.