A Day in the Night
Self-Published
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Description
A shortstory of a man's drive from work and his experience with a street and its preceding postguard.Inspired by William A. Schneiders, “Clark Street, Night Effect” painting.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Bartfrog
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 107
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Nikilan SRoyal Road★★★ 2.5See, the narrator is keep on mumbling the same thing, which in turn would turn readers bored. Also the pacing, sorry, is horrible! I think you should vary the sentence length. It is so long. And also, the narrator seems unrealistic. I think there could be a back story, but yeah, it is not nice. Consider refining it