A Chance To Become An Adonis

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Laying in his own pool of blood, Lu Chen watches his wife being embraced by another man. He couldn’t believe it. If there is any way possible, Lu Chen wanted to tear them apart from each other, yet nothing. Lu Chen couldn’t do anything as he slowly dies. And the final words he will ever hear was,

“You will always be nothing but second place.” Then a bullet went through his chest.

Before Lu Chen had lost all consciousness, endless regret begins to flow through him. The people that cared for him he ignored, people that trusted him he betrayed. The only thing he had on his mind was; a second chance.

However, it is as if somebody had heard him plead. Lu Chen was sent back to his 18-year-old body. He didn't want to believe it, yet he had to. Lu Chen couldn't waste this opportunity. What will the young man do to change his future?

Hello guys. I will be posting 2 chapters every 2 days somewhere between 9:00-10:00 pm.

Discord link: https://discord.gg/Ge8JfDk33C

Please note that I will be posting on RoyalRoad and Webnovel as well.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: placeintime

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 90
Views: 146,728

Chapters(155 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

PedroHMORoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Nothing really incredible or out of the ordinary in this novel the mc is pretty calm experienced and smart since he has returned in time the other charachters have pretty simple and layed out personalities the Mc's friend not that smart but pretty loyal to him the "bad guys" who are either the cunning and malicious ones and the more stupid and reckless ones that say shit whitout much thought are pretty standard but at least untill now no one seems to be a extreme mary sue and the story seems to be heading a good way i can't complain about charcter development since there are only 24 chapters as of right now and this is your first fiction, but yeah all good would recomend giving it a try( i am not a native english speaker sorry for any mistakes).
If you have any problems with my review you can relay them into me i'm not a conessiour of reviews or some crap like that just gave my honest feelings about your novel and by pretty standard and decent i don't mean bland it has quite a bit of flavor in it so i'm excited about new chapters keep up your good work.
ObreezyRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Okay it's an okay story it's just thst nothing is really going on in this story. What I mean is that there are 101 chapters I believe and in those chapters only two days have passed give or take 3. The pacing is extremely slow I know the male lead wasn't going to get any powers but like nothing is going on. The chapters are kinda short can be a little longer. Like some conversations take two chapters when the author could have just used one. I was hoping the male lead would have started to try and get himself a company or something but the only thing that was noticed was a haircut that's it. Anyway the pacing is slow if you just want to read something this is it. I hope when the author makes more chapters more exciting things will come out
CimmerianRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I'm giving the author some stars because, much like fentanyl, if it doesn't kill you, the book will hook you. I commend the author for writing a FREAKIN' TON (739 chapters), and for getting published. Also, for writing an absolutely haunting first 2 chapters.
I wish him much success for his hard work. I don't hate the ending and the general trend where it was headed was one that I would support (with a few caveats, which I'm sure you can tell if you read the entire review).
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That said, I quit this book about 8 times before coming back to "finish" it. (The story is clearly unfinished, after 739 chapters, but the author has moved on to other projects and hasn't added anything to this story, on any website, for at least 8 months.)
The first two chapters are written to hook and excite the readers. Thereafter, the author sets up interesting opportunities, dangles hope just within reach, occasionally shows minor progress, and quickly pulls it away inexplicably. Or, a chapter teases an interesting relationship, and following chapters have the MC react in a counterintuitive and oblivious manner. (Spoiler: Post reincarnation, the MC has no interest in women, not really a beta, but not interested because he was traumatized. Also, in his mind the girls around him are children and he seems to view himself as an adult in a young body. So you can pretty much skip the dumb slice-of-life crazy girl drama, because it is obvious it will go nowhere... until suddenly, it does. The end.) The fact that this story still has readers is a testament to the author's writing skills because the story is a frustrating masochistic exercise for only the most twisted readers. The things that characters in this story do, or don't do, and how they behave, will drive you insane again, and again, and again... Honestly, it is like you're reading the story of humanoid creatures whose social norms are completely different and/or who have brains that don't process information in any rational way.