A certain hero who was transported to a sci-fi world(experimental story)
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Description
The dragon god of Infinity approaches the world of Nazeweth. With every steps it make, Armageddon follows. In a desperate attempt to stop it, the gods of Nazeweth sent a hero to defeat the seemingly unstoppable creature........and the hero ended it in 2 hits(WOW, bravo *claps*). With such anti-climatic ending, the hero went to sleep & appeared in a new world different from Nazaweth. (This story is an experimental story(just wrote it on the spot for teh fun of it))
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Zetara
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 7
- Views
- 1,730
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- CCDCCRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A small protest against 0.5 ratings that, while absolutely fine in themselves, should NEVER be posted without telling the Author how to improve. If you don’t want to bother explaining him what he did “wrong”, don’t bother rating his work, either.
What I think about this work:
-Not too many grammar related mistakes (+)
-decent chapter length (+)
-the “sub-chapters” should be separated from each other, something like:
xyz
————–
Chapter 4
xyz
if you really want them to be sub-chapters. But it didn’t really cause a problem while reading
-story can go interesting ways (magic swordsman hero VS Sci-fi stuff)