A Castle Made of Wood, A Wine Made of Skulls
Self-Published
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Description
An old woman gets robbed in the night, with no one to witness but old books and a sack of wine.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Robin Autumns
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 260
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- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0The awkward word choices that are in this piece became rather distracting to the point that it became difficult to focus on it. There were several significant cases, such as the strange attribution to a door's arrogance or murky daggers or leather bottles. These types of things are really awkward because bottles are not made of leather - that'd be a wineskin. The prose is awkward in more than a few places as well. This is good, but the descriptions itself ultimately make this piece a tough read because of the errors.