A bored story (Hiatus)
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Description
"HIATUS"
This story is of a family that is not a very good one, a mother, a father and three sons the MC are the youngest, its not like they are the worst but neither good, suddenly the wole family are transported to a diferent world and with diferent bodys ¿what the youngest and his... "her" family will do to return? obiusly the story is of the youngest but will have some storys of the others too. Im not a creative person so if this story have somethin that you think is familiar maybe is for i put somethin for other story in this also this is my first story and i suck in english so im open to suggest and corrections. Possibly with mature content, +18
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Jonathan Drew
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 74
- Views
- 66,512
Chapters(29 total)
- HiatusJan 5, 2017
- PunishmentNov 29, 2016
- Combat for libertyNov 21, 2016
- ComplicationsNov 12, 2016
- The Dragon continentNov 2, 2016
- Again back to travelingOct 21, 2016
- The start of the journey and with problems in no timeOct 9, 2016
- Not a chapterSep 21, 2016
- The life spans and the last day after the travel.Sep 4, 2016
- A new pet?Aug 30, 2016
- Fear? and go back to normal life....or not yet?Aug 22, 2016
- Finally the relic!Aug 15, 2016
- The bandit group and we are almost there!Aug 9, 2016
- The Friendzone and an amry of wolvesAug 1, 2016
- Rest in the dungeon and going out of the closet?Jul 23, 2016
- More Dungeons than Dragons!Jul 15, 2016
- The first day of school!Jul 8, 2016
- The Moon family and Gina win!Jul 1, 2016
- A new friend and the academyJun 29, 2016
- ¿The date? and the testJun 26, 2016
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Community Reviews(2)
- TahuRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I have really been enjoying this story so far, with its unique and funny characters with a nice plot so far. Honestly the only things you would have to work on is spelling and grammar, but other than that great job so far.
- C3rb3rusRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5the story so far is interesting and funny. the charecters are well thought out and likable
the thing you need to work on are your grammer, spelling, and the giant walls of text
good job