A beautiful white night, under the blue moon.
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
In a principality where humans are seen as the dominant species, a young white tiger slave tries to earn her freedom!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- SleepyWaffle
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 241
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- IIIGenesisRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story has potential, the world you buit seems interesting, and seems you have tought quite a lot about the lore behind you story, I would like to see a dictionary with explaining the words you use, because some of the latin words you used are not that self explanatory, I personally had to search some of the to see what exactly they mean.
The characters that you mentioned especially the princes I hope we will learn more about them and dive deeper into their intentions especially the start of the Purification.
I wouldn't lite to see the story evolve into a basic romance, I hope we will see some world politics and other large scale events happening.
I also encourage you to make the chapters longer and try to improve the chapter structure, with paragraphs and separations rather than a long wall of text, because it seems low effort, also some poarts could use some rewriting.
I will come back to this review and update my rating as the story progresses, if you need more constructive criticism and feedback feel free to message me, I am willing to help you out to see you succed in finishing the story that you started.