5 Dragon Emperor

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Chang Mu is a cultivator at the principle of cultivation was the third person to achieve Immortally. Using his powers Chang Mu united the seven kingdoms, becoming their emperor.Chang Mu was poisoned by his Chang Chi, his own brother turning him back into a mortal. Chang Mu knew that Chang Chi wanted the five Dragon pendant, because the pendant held mysterious powers, powers beyond his own, Although Chang Mu faced death, he didn't give in and took his own life, but not before crushing the 5 dragon pendant.While the heavens forces one to reincarnate themselves into a new world without any memories, Chang Mu goes against the heavens and forces his soul to reincarnate in his own time. What drives him on is revenge, and his target is Chang Chi.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
Xzavon

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
686
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602,796

Chapters(66 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • RamennRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    OP MC
    Badass
    MC not pussy
    the plot is stable and more focused on MC training to reach peak, just like MGS.
    NICEEE FOLLOW
  • TincanTurtleRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    From the prologue i was expecting a lot. The prologue was great.  However from then on the story has been lackluster. The story feels like its not detailed enough, like Im reading a summary.
    MC is supposed to be an emperor, a man in the pinnacle of his cultivation, yet he doesn’t show any of that. He makes poor choices that doesn’t show any of his prestige or experience as an emperor.
    Skills, on the other hand, i don’t get why he has to regain mastery over it. When in his past life he shouldve gained mastery of a vast array of skills. It just seems unnecessary. Atleast give a reason for.
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    Edit
    I made the review during earlier chapters of the story. The story has improved.
  • GopperRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    finally a novel that gets me excited; the novel is really good, like superb... this is the type of novel i would definitely be following if it was being translated (superb)
    now the cons: its definitely needs to be rewritten (BUT PLEASE DO THAT AFTER YOU FINISH THE NOVEL, DONT LEAVE ME HANGING); the problem of this novel is that it lacks substance - the MC rapidly rises up and is almost at immortal level yet there have been like no development - his friends (Gan) are also retarded and tbh its only his master that has shown some development (good develop)... his new mother is almost paragon and she is not the least bit suspicious at his rapid development? he rapidly levels up and goes out gets owned by beasts then is like omg i need to train more (what is preventing him from not just training to immortal - would be pills/elixers so why does he not go to places which have that)
    your novel has huuuuuuuuuuuuuuge potential and i like what i have read so far, but definitely needs a rewrite to add more substance and flow but DUDE GJ ON THIS NOVEL!
  • shuikoRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Premise is interesting, prologue was promising.
    Then it all went down the drain.
    Author isn't writing a story. He's writing summaries of a dream he had, with 0 detail, 0 character discretion, 0 character growth, and 0 logical sense in his MC's actions.
    This continues for 50 chapters, with no change. Another wannabe fiction story that has no substance within it.